Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-29980193-20200310201700/@comment-71.255.116.68-20200311174051

KirbyPKMNInkling wrote: 71.255.116.68 wrote: Pretty good stuff actually, I'm assuming you wrote most of this Sakura.

Minor nitpicks:

Wario Parters in Crime has a vs. against.... themself? By the mention of 'her' it's clearly a mislabeling.

Roulx needs more ths and excessive pseudo-Shakespearan or it just ain't him.

Don't know if it's intentional, but Elmo's vs quote against Dedede isn't in third person like usual.

Feel like HOBaRT's vs quote against FF is a bit too obvious with the reference, shorten it to *T U R N I N G D O W N* but that's like I said, just a nitpick, it's pretty good.

Feel like Funny 7's only non-SEVEN vs quote being against HOBaRT is approprate, but I have a better one: "NOT SEVEN DIDN'T LAUGH"

James Pond's is pretty funny, but I'm pretty sure a character from a 90s platforming game wouldn't say ass, cheeks maybe. Maybe it's the actual James Pond the pond, and mark each with a (P) or (F) to show who's talking, I'd actually have to watch gameplay of James Pond to see if James Pond the fish speaks at all. Also like minor backstory for James Pond the pond is my idea is that he's the legit James Bond, but transformed by failing to stop supervillain or something, yet still retains sentience somehow. Something you'd expect out of like Dr. Doofenschmirtz' schenigans or something.

Good, but change Krist's quote into English. Like I said, he'd probably use English when speaking to characters that speak it, just obviously outdated English. German should still be his self-comment language though.

I'm actually geniunely suprised Sakura didn't write anything for Chiaki considering she's a Danganronpa character and also has it as a source. And if y'all need stuff for Batter, Bipper, and Scourge Sisters may post some stuff, but I just like to make matching quotes which is why I didn't. In fact I can help with like a lot of my submissions to varying degrees, I just can't edit the doc to post them. My thoughts on hour thoughts

- OOF I am big dumb

- I am really bad at writing Roulx's accent, I obviously know what he'd say but applying the accent is hella hard for me

- Yeah it was a reference

- I didn't write that one, that one was Bart

- Yes

- Gonna have to change Mozart later when I have my hands on a translator

- I know I'm surprised with myself as well

- And I'm definitely gonna call you for some of the later characters

Honestly one of my favorite characters to write is Bipper. Probably cause Bill Cipher is a fun Character in general. Oh I know James Pond's was written by Bart, I remember it.

And Mozart doesn't have to speak German, he only does that for stuff addressed to himself. For talking directly to anyone he would just speak English, but with antiquated phrasing, spelling and references, basically think of how somebody like Benjamin Franklin would write, since Colonial America is only like 20 years after Mozart's death, and had he lived past 20 he would have definitely been around for it.

Updated Roulx quotes:

Why do you helpth the fat wormth?

Oh dear, who releasedth the Jevil out of thy dungeonth...

Actually, that beth a mere Lightner worm.

I SHALT MAKETH MAC AND CHEESETH AND NOBODY SHALT STOPPETH ME! (yes I get the funny reference, but just like Eggman's Announcement was rewritten to be in character for the AoStH Robotnik in KfAD thus there you go for the Mac n Cheese meme, which should actually be some sort of clash quote with Doctors Green and Purple as the audio from the meme actually originated froma short joke clip of Dragon Ball, probably as a victory quote, although I do acknowledge it works better with HOBaRT, maybe just mention mac n cheese around Piccolo)

also I get y'all don't get homesuck references, but Vriska's speech has to be written exactly as I wrote it, it's kinda big thing.

In short all trolls have a specific "quirk" which is how they write, and quirks are a big pretty important thing in Alternian culture, you can't use another troll's quirk and you gotta use it 24/7. Simliar thing for smilies since they are representive of the troll's appearance.

Since Vriska's stchick is being a spider bitch her quirk is based around the number 8, she extends vowels and punctuation exactly 8 times, substitutes 8 for any occurance of the letter b (but sometimes fucks it up and places it wherever when she gets worked up), and her smiley is based on the fact she has 8 eyes. (or so she claims, in reality,  a pretty much omnipowerful [and petty] entity got told she stole one of his magic future-telling cue balls so he blew it up and fucked up her eye in the process, it still works fine though as an eye)

homestuck is complicated

Vriska is actually the troll with the LEAST complex quirk after Karkat who just writes in all caps, due to her inherently casual and flippant nature towards everything, that's also why she fucks up the placement of 8s when she's worked up, she doesn't care enough ni the moment to put them where they're supposed to go.

and terezi's is just usage of 413, basically homestuck's equivalent to siiva's funny 7, it's the designated 'lore number' and shows up everywhere under various excuses. 4 = A, 1 = I and 3 = E, she writes in caps, and her smiley is literally just Wood Man's, she's the only character that uses a square bracket instead of a round one for smilies.

Sorry for the Homosuck info dump y'all, Tony's gonna be triggered as fuck, it's just important for how they're written. >_>