Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-29980193-20200310201700/@comment-71.255.116.68-20200311162428

Pretty good stuff actually, I'm assuming you wrote most of this Sakura.

Minor nitpicks:

Wario Parters in Crime has a vs. against.... themself? By the mention of 'her' it's clearly a mislabeling.

Roulx needs more ths and excessive pseudo-Shakespearan or it just ain't him.

Don't know if it's intentional, but Elmo's vs quote against Dedede isn't in third person like usual.

Feel like HOBaRT's vs quote against FF is a bit too obvious with the reference, shorten it to *T U R N I N G D O W N* but that's like I said, just a nitpick, it's pretty good.

Feel like Funny 7's only non-SEVEN vs quote being against HOBaRT is approprate, but I have a better one: "NOT SEVEN DIDN'T LAUGH"

James Pond's is pretty funny, but I'm pretty sure a character from a 90s platforming game wouldn't say ass, cheeks maybe. Maybe it's the actual James Pond the pond, and mark each with a (P) or (F) to show who's talking, I'd actually have to watch gameplay of James Pond to see if James Pond the fish speaks at all. Also like minor backstory for James Pond the pond is my idea is that he's the legit James Bond, but transformed by failing to stop supervillain or something, yet still retains sentience somehow. Something you'd expect out of like Dr. Doofenschmirtz' schenigans or something.

Good, but change Krist's quote into English. Like I said, he'd probably use English when speaking to characters that speak it, just obviously outdated English. German should still be his self-comment language though.

I'm actually geniunely suprised Sakura didn't write anything for Chiaki considering she's a Danganronpa character and also has it as a source. And if y'all need stuff for Batter, Bipper, and Scourge Sisters may post some stuff, but I just like to make matching quotes which is why I didn't. In fact I can help with like a lot of my submissions to varying degrees, I just can't edit the doc to post them.